The pacing as it is now is excellent.Its deliberatly slow and really allows the audience to pay attention and look at the world you created. I think that adding a narration, with your voice of course, will really drive the entire piece. The images could work on there own but it would be foolish to not include at least a sample of your writing since it is so rich.
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The pacing as it is now is excellent.Its deliberatly slow and really allows the audience to pay attention and look at the world you created. I think that adding a narration, with your voice of course, will really drive the entire piece. The images could work on there own but it would be foolish to not include at least a sample of your writing since it is so rich.
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